Clouds as shadows
Dark clouds, following like a shadow, everywhere right by me
Waiting for opportunity, smothering me with depression, like days time by
Darker in colour, as if angered by my stubbornish, in allowing myself to surrender
Suffocating the life, draining the spirit, sucking the joy which was fitted
Experienced those darkest of days, never returning into the world, once is enough in this life time
Tan Nguyen
[ Smiles ] A nice short piece of writing!
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Thank you for reading Renard
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[ Smiles ] You are most welcome!
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Great stuff. I wish I could produce stuff like that!
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I don’t think it’s hard. I always thought everyone was able
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I suppose everyone has their own style! It’s what makes individual pieces so beautiful.
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I’m sure your able. It took me ages to find mine. Still trying actually
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Yeah. I know what you mean. I’m never sure if I want to express myself in a poem or a story or a painting.
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Doesn’t have to be classified as something. That’s the beauty of expression with words. Doesn’t have to have rules. It’s your own expression
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That’s true. Thanks!
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Your welcome
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You’re very wise. And again your poetry is great! Xoxo
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Thanks for that. But I don’t think I’m wise. Many stupid mistakes in life
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Happens to everyone. Great writing material from those experiences, in my opinion.
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Thank you for your kindness
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Great stuff! I wish I could write like that!
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